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You became me (poem #2)
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07-05-2012, 06:13 AM
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You expressing your feelings for someone who helped you through a struggle, possibly an addiction or something.
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07-05-2012, 06:16 AM
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(07-05-2012 06:13 AM)Sin Wrote: You expressing your feelings for someone who helped you through a struggle, possibly an addiction or something. Addiction yes.  you're good.
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07-05-2012, 06:17 AM
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(07-05-2012 06:16 AM)Robbieava Wrote:I think it's more you being good, not a bad poem at all even if it is your 2nd. I've never written poetry before I don't think.(07-05-2012 06:13 AM)Sin Wrote: You expressing your feelings for someone who helped you through a struggle, possibly an addiction or something. |
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07-05-2012, 06:20 AM
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(07-05-2012 06:17 AM)Sin Wrote:(07-05-2012 06:16 AM)Robbieava Wrote:I think it's more you being good, not a bad poem at all even if it is your 2nd. I've never written poetry before I don't think.(07-05-2012 06:13 AM)Sin Wrote: You expressing your feelings for someone who helped you through a struggle, possibly an addiction or something. You make a good point. But I am also an artist who performs and what not. It's just my first times in the ropes of poetry. 
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