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some lyrics I wrote
08-22-2017, 08:56 PM (This post was last modified: 08-22-2017 10:29 PM by almightysemiwizard.)
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hello guys that's my first attempt and it may sound cheesy.probably needs more work but I just wanted to share.that woul be a rock, grunge-alternative song.I have some sounds in my head Tounge
its actually about the lazy, conventional, shy, anxious, "old" part of myself and how ill get rid of it (hopefully)
so here it is, hope its not too bad Tounge
I realize there is not a proper chorus, a vety short one lol

What ill say may sound
So very alien to you
Buts its so very real
This constant struggle I fight
Its like one part of me holding down the other
But its still all myself
Its all inside my head

Its not hard to change
For a couple of days
But then it all comes back
Slowly crawling
Inside my head

Yeah
Inside my head
Yeah

Dont want you
But youre still a part of me
I'm going to kill you
No place for you inside of me

Yeah
Inside of me
Yeah

I'm not like you
Youre not me
Being on my guard
I wont let you take
Take control

Control
Yeah
Take control

You'll win a fight
But war is not over
Dont you see
Youre dying slowly
Dying day by day

just wrote it in about 10-15 mins as it came to mind so if you say its gibberish i cant argue with that Happy
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08-22-2017, 09:38 PM
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Cool man

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08-22-2017, 10:31 PM
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thanks! I want to become good at writing songs one day, learn guitar, play in a band, or do it solo.
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08-23-2017, 11:39 AM
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Like it ...
and glad to see your bright spirit , tooSmiling
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08-23-2017, 03:21 PM (This post was last modified: 08-23-2017 05:52 PM by almightysemiwizard.)
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thanks smokevision! I'm trying to keep that spirit and turn it into action.
and you know what, I dont give a fuck anymore,that god lost, not I.
my problems will not be permanent and I will create for myself a better life but I will never forget.he lost me and he lost big time.
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08-24-2017, 12:14 AM
Post: #6
Don't sell your soul,
its pure poetic,creative, let it blossom by ....
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08-24-2017, 12:30 AM
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(08-24-2017 12:14 AM)smokevision Wrote:  Don't sell your soul,
its pure poetic,creative, let it blossom by ....

Happy

and nice poem i like suffering and death and confusion too

but dooooooooooooooooont seeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeel yoooooooooooour sooooooooooooooooooooul ......

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08-24-2017, 12:51 AM (This post was last modified: 08-24-2017 12:59 AM by almightysemiwizard.)
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it was not about selling soul,howewer I consider it sometimes as a fantasy.if such thing is at all possible I probably wouldnt do it... probably...
but any deal other than that and ill take it
what I wanted to say was that I dont care about this supposed god or his supposed rules anymore.I dont care about who gets hurt other than family, friends and loved ones and only a handful of people I respect.other than that they could die for all I care if its beneficial to me.I got the leson of how fucked up and careless life is

dont get me wrong.I value kindness and goodness and I value good people.I'm not an asshole but I come first, then people I care for and only then everybody else
you have to choose a side, be a prey or predator
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08-28-2017, 08:48 PM (This post was last modified: 08-29-2017 01:13 AM by almightysemiwizard.)
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War, rape, murder
Isnt that enough?
Suffering, sorrow, despair
Isnt that enough?

Where is your god now?
Where it is?
Has he forgot?
Plays the deaf

Sickness oh
The world is sick
Your neigbor yeah
Cant find money to live

Where is your god now?
Tell me now
Has he forgot?
My faith Is gone!

I can't forget
I can't forgive
I dont understand you
How can I love you?

You lost me
Failed me yeah
Disappointment
Is all you gave me

Now hey!
Listen to me!
You are going to
Listen to me!
No justice
No restraint
I'm going to do
Just like you
Dont judge me now
Just like you

Fuck!
Yeah!

Just like you

Fuck!
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08-29-2017, 06:40 AM (This post was last modified: 08-29-2017 06:40 AM by Homicide.)
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Reminds me of some metallica stuff Wink
no bad no bad at all..

wheres your god wheres your god oh wheres your fucking god




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