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some lyrics I wrote
08-29-2017, 09:53 AM
Post: #11
I feel like this would make a great screemo song.

Take everything with a grain of salt, and a mound of hope.
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08-29-2017, 05:04 PM (This post was last modified: 08-29-2017 05:09 PM by almightysemiwizard.)
Post: #12
Thanks! I think it was better than the first one. Lol Homicide "no god"
I didn't listen to metallica but I like some "heavy" music
And screams, of course! Aaaaahhhh god!
Its the one way of letting things out. Another is listening to aggressive rock music and pretending like I'm the one performing. I feel better after that
Wish I had a guitar
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08-29-2017, 05:48 PM
Post: #13
I feel that. Like I always get little music videos in my head while jamming.

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09-02-2017, 06:21 PM (This post was last modified: 09-02-2017 06:35 PM by almightysemiwizard.)
Post: #14
cheesy i know,but cant improve without practise Tounge


This just cant go on
the way it was before
this will not end well
i cant live like that anymore

where is the way?
all i see are problems
whats wrong with me?
all i see is gray and ugly

the time is flying by
i cant waste it anymore
but i cant even rely on myself
i need somewhere where im safe

where is the way?
all i see are problems
whats wrong with me?
all i see is gray and ugly

some get it all
and some get nothing
what can i do?
when the burden gets too heavy

AAARGGHH!!!!

same on me!
shame on me!
same on me!
shame on me!

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something feels not right today
and i dont know why
i wonder to myself
if i ever was alright

something is not right today
and i dont know what
a voice inside my head
tells me to end it all

am i broken?
or im pretending
heavily mistaken
paranoia ridden

i dont know how to feel
i dont know what to think
im desperately searching
for some meaning

am i broken?
or im pretending
heavily mistaken
paranoia ridden
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09-02-2017, 06:36 PM
Post: #15
Practice makes improvement.

"Same on me!
Shame on me!
Same on me!
Shame on me!"

Whatever you do, keep that.

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09-02-2017, 07:28 PM
Post: #16
thanks Smiling
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09-20-2017, 01:25 AM (This post was last modified: 09-20-2017 01:40 AM by almightysemiwizard.)
Post: #17
lets get it started again
I'm lonely in my room again
I'm thinking about you again
ill let it bleed again

like the colors faded out
like the world lost its charm
everything is pale without you

we are alike but still worlds away
you couldn't love me anyway
I'm broken al the way down
right through my body and soul

like fhe colors faded out
like the world lost its charm
everything is pale without you now

I speak as though I have known you
as though you have known me
it was only dreams and fantasy
and now its all gone

take this from me
make it disappear
like how it came about
make it go away

I'm sick of this living
I'm sick of the shame
every day I wake up
to face again the same
over and over again

away!
take it away!
to never return
away!
make it disappear!
Its more than I can bear

I'm sick of this living
I'm sick of the shame
every day I wake up
to face again the same
over and over again

away!
take it away!
to never return
away!
make it disappear!
more than what I can bear

let me live
let me breathe
let me feel
let me love
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09-20-2017, 09:34 AM
Post: #18
Your format is starting to get crisper. I sang through, and was able to keep it constant for the most part.

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09-20-2017, 08:36 PM
Post: #19
thanks for your constant feedback Smiling it getting that way is good right? Happy
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09-20-2017, 09:57 PM
Post: #20
Yep, and no problem. I'm a huge advocate for creative expression.

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