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[Art] dangerous(poem)

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is this my nature to be?
oh how long ive been deprived
wallowing in shards of a perfect reality
heaven and hell blend together
now the incomplete is complete
awful noise or beautiful music
depends on your experiences
thorough to a T
maybe the prison is discovering
from naive tO dangerous
is it meant to be?
a sword that takes hold of its user and never legs go?
or am i a sentient being?
with thoughts emotions and feelings?
my purity was casted into darKness
because "I" didnt want to harm a thing
dangerous is it meant to be
you cant Love without risking hatred
a coLd and calculated empTy mind
nOw days my helping hand can be crippling
the coLder it gets the stranger the warmth is
sulfar burns blue
copper burns green
"I"n the end we all burn or freeze
now it is
it neVer used to be
now powEr is the new everything
 

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The first couple of lines really hit me. But I'm a wreck. I think it works really well until around the middle. I know myself that happens. The feeling that needs to be released quickly drains into the page. Then you are left with just your mind to complete it.
Some of it didn't make sense:

my purity was casted into darKness
because "I" didnt want to harm a thing

But that is a thought I've had, that we all must fall into darkness to lose some limitation on our soul. Innocence?

Needs some work with spelling, too. But who cares about that?

why do you think this is dangerous?
 
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