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It's a product of a pair of sorcerers, myself included, who wrote out a book designed to read like a fantasy book while providing actual lessons I took a source material (in italics) and broke it up, wrote around and explained it. I sent it to beta readers but the non occultists called it boring. After a while of studying how to make it more interesting I began to wonder if that was going to be a problem for my target audience, occultists. I decided to get feedback